Journal entry #4

September 26th 2020

This week, we only had one class. We submitted our first drafts of our technical descriptions. As I said in the previous entry, I made it more focused on the subject matter, taking out anything irrelevant, however, looking back at it after submitting, it felt a little bit boring. In the professors email, he said to make it more engaging and grabbing. I’m not exactly sure on how drastically i need to change everything, but I am going to add one or more graphic, and maybe organize the information better.

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