Journal Entry #3

September 21st 2020

In last week’s first class, we had to brainstorm and free write about the objects or mechanisms we chose. And in the second class, we made an outline for the technical description. I felt like i added a little bit too much irrelevant information, and I also added my opinions, which are not supposed to be in technical descriptions. So, in the draft that we had to write after, I took out all what I thought was unnecessary and kept the description a little more focused on the subject.

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